Friday, March 16, 2007

Pink Jellyfish

Stranded in a pool
By the tide
As I was stranded
On the beach
By the Sabbath
Smaller than a saucer
Pale rose pink
And in possession
Of invisible
Stinging tendrils
Apparently
As the unpleasant buzzing
Smarting
Burning in my little finger would attest.

6 comments:

Molly Merula said...

I love verses 8-11 XD Sounds painful, but we have to learn these things sometime...right?

Ay asei...tun sut san. You should make a book of poetry and then we can get rich...and gorge on chocolate :]

C said...

Brilliant! ^_^

Molly Merula said...

Oh, I deleted my blogs...and made a new one...Just thought I'd let you know since I'm in your sidebar, am I not? The new URL is http://ashirasrealm.blogspot.com

C said...

Wha-??? OK! I fix eet.

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- David

C said...

Which part?